Are you starting to see?

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Gun Shy Kisses-(+)-
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I stepped back
for the first time in my career
as a Seeker
unsure of myself,
my next step…
I never knew what love was
Never felt it…
…
received it
But I could see it
in an enemies tear
“What has this Drug Boss done
to warrant such loyalty”
I asked
“I don’t know…”
Not exactly the answer
I had hoped for

-Here we see Charlotte’s search for love… in some small way, she has always been looking…
What are your thoughts!? Is this still confusing or are you starting to see!?

Blessed Be in Love… just Love, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

She still hasn't "found it" because it still belongs to someone else, even though she sees it!. She has learnt something from someone she has spent 2 minutes confronting!? Rare to do that!. I think she is mellowing, but what repurcussions this has we are sure to find out next!.

You are a great student of human nature Siren!. It shines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

They are getting smoother as you go along!. I think you're starting to hit your groove Siren!.

Here are some line comments to use as you will:

I stepped back
for the first time
as a Seeker
unsure
of myself,
my next step…
I never knew what love was
Never felt it…
…
received it
But I could see it
in an enemy's tear
“What has this Drug Boss done
to warrant such loyalty!?”
I asked
“I don’t know…”
Not exactly the answer
I had hoped for

It's coming together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com