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Gun Shy Kisses-(+)-
# 10

Neither of us would yield
nor drop our loaded blades
“So what are we to do!?”
her voice…
genuine!?
“I have to make a living”
my truth
“and I have to protect her”
hers,’ I assumed
time passed
unbearable
“I hope neither of us
wants blood shed here…”
My sharp voice
breaking the silence
Something would not allow
temper to pull the trigger

-I am hoping I can bring this to resolution before poem 39… though I do not think it will go that far I hope you all don’t mind if we are in for a bit more…

Blessed Be in the Ongoing Story, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm getting a little confused on what "Kay" is!. In #3 & #5 you mention "he" - then in #7, 9 and 10 - a "she" is mentioned!. Is this the same character "Kay"!? ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh Le sigh!.!.My apologies madame!.!.!.I did so want to read this story and believe me i tried!.!.I read number one and number two and I became very confused!.!.I can't tell what's going on I assume that the problem lies in either my small brain or the fact that I've been neglecting my on-line friends and these characters have already been introduced in a previous storyWww@QuestionHome@Com

No, I don't think we mind a bit more!. But why aren't they dropping the gun!. Charlotte isn't falling for the assassin who has fallen for Kay!? Oh, what a love triangle!. Honestly, I am so confused!.!.!.but waiting with bated breath for the resolution!. Honestly, you've got us hooked, now give us what we demand!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really great and i could not get enough and whatever happens i will be watch with fingernails in mouth as it's really exciting writing at it's best!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi Siren,

So, we come to the standoff!. Not a lot of changes here just a few content questions:

Loaded blades is a bit confusing for me--given that I thought we were dealing with guns!.

also, would a seeker (assassin) be concerned with bloodshed!?

Okay to the lines:

Neither of us would yield
nor drop our guns
“So what are we to do!?”
her voice…
genuine!?
“I have to make a living”
my truth!.
“And I have to protect her”
hers,’ I assumed!.
Waiting was unbearable!.
My voice sharper than I wished,
“I hope neither of us
wants blood shed here…”
Something would not allow
my temper to pull the triggerWww@QuestionHome@Com