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Question: And of your 15 minutes!?
Addiction
Trodding away these 15 timers
envious the floods, the adoration
bestowed upon newbies born!.
Yelling, screaming, pleading, they go
Reverence, desired… never enough
diets deprived demand attention!.
Tempers flare, egos bruise… rebel
they hear, sense, feel the word, passé!.
This roller ride now coasting
drifting, dimming…dying
no opiates can sate ego’s tremor
only death and final lights…Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ah, the infamous fifteen minutes of fame!.
'Tis fleeting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Hi!",
Very good Neonman!.
A strong message has been displayed in this poem!.
Children do tend to get neglected by most parents that are on some form of drugs as, drugs tend to end up more on their priority list!.
You said what was needed to be said!. Certainly not a waste of pen!.
This poem was done really, really well!.
Loved it!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
i'm not sure i understand all the metaphors, but your poem is effective and i can feel the discouragement!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
There is a lot here to uncover! I'm still looking!.
Denial has no key to unlock the door!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sorry, dreadful, but if/when you write a good one I'll tell you!. You have been 'Ianoed'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Bravo! To quote a friend and poet: "well penned!." I don't waste my time on these arguments any more!. I don't have any time at all to waste if we are to meet deadline!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
But the hunger persists!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com