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Question: Is this the first day of the best of your life!?
No Intent!.!.!.!.Pt!. 1

In the midst of society
Everyone trying to be free
It’s available for you and me
Yet there are those too blind to see

It’s all so clear in your face
You just can’t find your own space
Wishing you were in another place
Go under cover mix with the race

Step off the edge try to stop time
Turn the page see what you find
It’s all rapped up in the rhyme
Or maybe it’s all just in your mind

Never making it to the top ten
The mirror can never be your friend
Evil thoughts on the verge of sin
Cross your heart and do it again

Looking for that inner peace
Load your head feel the release
Falling through a hollow crease
Never knowing west from east

Leave the train at the station
Break free create a new relation
Make your own right situation
Forget about the devastation

Tilt your head up to the sun
Know you’re not the only one
It ain’t over until it’s done
Turn yourself to number oneWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
great! A day at a time, that any one can handle, if not a
moment will do, and your poem is a moments start!.
I like it, full of energy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is beautiful with such a depth of meaning!. I love the lines
"Tilt your head up to the sun
Know you're not the only one
It ain't over til it's done
Turn yourself to number one"
That is wonderful and compassionate advice!. If everyone heeded this advice, the world would be a more enlightened place!. I do appreciate it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lot of words conveyed with the summation being get off your duff, be yourself and stand tall!? There is a nice flow to your words, not forced as in a lot of rhymed poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com