Can you see the future?

Question: Can you see the future!?

Prescience!?
by C!.S!. Scotkin

I see a sunny day on Mars
A red reflection to the stars!.

Air out words in my head
musty from misuse, or dread!.

Muses dancing happily
Around this small space ship!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

which one!?
the future in my head!.
or the future after im dead!.
(frantically searches for my brochure to Mars)

a happy spaceship is not a lost one!.
nice going Cynthia!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know all lines do not have to rhyme - but the last line needs something - it seems to stand out TOO much!. Suggestion: how 'bout changing "ship" to "colony"!. If this is about the future - you should have a colony set up - by then - anyway ;-) ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
"This is the best shortest poem I've seen!.

I hope there is room on the ship for me : )

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Muse misuse is a misdemeanie on Mars!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

At last, the muses are freed !!! Take me along !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

poem of future
keep it up
excellentWww@QuestionHome@Com

poetry

love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

let flow with the wind n dusk of the world!
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.nothing love inthe earth!!Www@QuestionHome@Com