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Question: Opinion on my poem please!?! (dedicated to my role model)!?
You are my role model,
The one who I will always look up too!.
You were always there,
To guide me when there was only darkness!.
To help me choose the right path!.
No matter what happened,
you always looked for a bright side!.
You always tried to get everyone back on their feet,
when they were down!.
You always told me never to hold grudges!.
You taught me to forgive but never forget!.
And life is too short,
so try to make every moment special!.
When my mind was too clouded for me to see the truth,
you were there,
ready to blow them away!.
There to help me make the right choices!.
Althought you never actually made the decisions for me,
I am thankful for you!.
Because now that it's time for me to stand on my own,
I understand why!.
Thank you for always being there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
*applauds* good job! =) i like it! it is a very good poem! it reminds me of many people in my life such as my parents, my sister, and my friends (that includes you)!.!.!.no no thank YOU for always being there for me! =D i really love this poem and i do not say that very often!.!.!.is that not true!? =D
*star* for you! (i wish i could give you more than one for that poem)Www@QuestionHome@Com
AWWWWWWWW KAY that was breauifull i loved it XD
it almost made me cry cuse it reminded me of me and my dad XD
thats an asome poem i never lost intrest in it
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Its fantastic!.!.!.speaks volumes of your relationship with this person!.And I'm sure it would be appreciated more by that person than by anyone else!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very good!. You have a solid structure and kept my intrest very well!. Continue the great work!Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice, buddy!.!.keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com