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Question: Are you indifferent to this piece, or, have I somehow captured the moment!?
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CURIOSITY KILLS

Smoke and fog
creep from the bog
and dogs bawl out
for their masters,

Sneak and creep
to take a peek
at forest’s deep
shadow caster,

What you’ve seen
is not dream,
do not turn around,
run faster…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
V3 line 2 "a" missing

Is not a dream

Otherwise very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

The formidable shadow caster escapes from a great abyss cracked open in his demented mind, crawls down and prowls the cemetery after dark searching for own his lost soul!.


Imaginations all alive and working overtime! good Job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

indifferent to all i think
but you definatey captured a moment!.
i still turned around anyway
and saw only my shadow,
just as i heard Dondi fall from his chair!.
lol!.!.i think hes breathing ok now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You captured the moment of an excellent descriptive fabricated imagination creeping around in the fog!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is the poem about that stupid guy that just has to find out what that strange light was coming from the Old McCurty house up on the bog!.!.!.

Some people say Demons was at work!.

Idiot!.

Fun poem TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, you've captured a frightening moment!. It makes me wonder what was seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very ghostly and/or demonic!. Perfect, moving imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And here I sit holding my breath to find out what is there, until I finally pass out from lack of air and fall from my chair!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the moment has stopped for a second until the time is right to move on!. Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK Stephen, when is the movie coming to theatres around the world!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

dark and spooky, I love it!. A little unsatisfying, I want to know more! I'm a curious sort!.!.!. oops, bad news for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!"

Don't know the tittle of the movie but the plots there!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've got me scared and running!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i need pointsWww@QuestionHome@Com