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Question: Do you think Yahoo! will recognize this as a question regarding the attributes and shortcomings of this poem!?
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IN NEED OF A SHOWER
Mud-maker rain,
bring down the waves
of cleansing spray,
makes me
pure
again,
Wash my face
and lather my hands
so the grime and decay
leave me,
clean,
shaved,
Don’t show me a mirror
where I may see
anger and pain,
return me
fresh,
saved!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Great poem TD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
LOL!.!.!.TD!.!.!.Yahoo itself does not recognize a question!. It is the people who answer/surf/whatever that are responsible for reporting a post as a non-question!.
TD, I read, with mounting interest, all of your posts!. Your poetry draws me!. Though I will admit I have found some less than fascinating, and some more than enchanting!.
This one!? Shortcomings!? Attributes!? I am qualified to point neither out!.!.!.!.!.however, I will say this one gave me quite a giggle!.!.!.the immediate reading is hilarious, the layers, once read again, become more onion like as the poem settles in!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not too many people--certainly not the Yahoo machine---will be able to find shortcomings in this poem!. Rain: "mud-maker" and source of "cleansing spray!." Talk about a dual nature!! The entire poem is metaphoric--special!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
im not qualified either,
but everybody here seems to think
you got behind your ears and
did your elbows, so
i'll just soak up your clean example!.
ty!.
you did you put the soap back, right!? :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Baptised you be!
Yahoo has a hard time distinguishing questions from "questions!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Last stanza an 'acrostic!?'
Dwarfs!.!.!.!.!.neat!
This poem uses good plays on words!.!.!.the ending words are turned well, for the next stanza!.!.!.!.neat!.!.uh, clean saved!Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Hi!",
Hmmm, I agree
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com