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Question: Sad poem that I wrote!?
Empty Handed

The wind blows across my hair
As I stare infinitely out, without a care
The fall below is far but not as far as my heart will go
"Empty handed I entered this world and so shall I leave it"


Just so you all know Im not sad, or suicidal, quite the opposite in fact!. I just wrote a sad poem for fun!. Hope you all enjoy it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Amazing poem!! You have good word choice and it rhymes!. Most importantly it has deep meaning!. You are talented, great poem!! I write deep poems sometimes too but i'm not depressed either, they're not nearly as good as that though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love the poem!!!! i dont write them so i dont know how hard it is!!!! but in seconed grade i remember having to write a poem and recite it infront of everybody =( but that was ok!.!.!.!. at least you dont have to recite it!.!.!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Just phrases with line breaks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i need pointsWww@QuestionHome@Com