Demused-Evolution of a Poet IV
The blood
ran into rivers
of ink,
and out of those rivers,
she made a mirror!.
Away from the world,
I was beautiful!.
Away from the world,
my pain had a face,
my own,
and I wrote it
with her name!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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The blood ran into rivers of ink, and out of those rivers, she made a mirror!. Away from the world, I was beautiful!. Away from the world, my pain had a face, my own, and I wrote it with her name!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Oh, my!. This is just stunning!. The imagery is incredible and gives a deep understanding of the situation!. Where we are coming from is illuminated here, but where we are going is still an enigma!. This is intense!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A muse making river-blood mirrors!.!.!. how visually thrilling and poetic!.!.!. you know me, I am rooted in the visual!.!.!. and this delivers!Www@QuestionHome@Com Someday!.!.!.you have got to turn the mirror around!.!.!.heheheWww@QuestionHome@Com |