It's my first non-rhyming poem
Title either "Stupid young girl" or "Sunburn"
Stupid young girl
forgot to wear sunscreen!.
Mind blurred and uncontrolled
as she stumbles around!.
Blazing hot sun
shines his rays on her skin!.
Her young, innocent body
becoming burned with his tricks!.
Burning the exterior
attempting to get inside!.
Taking advantage of her stupidity,
no sunscreen, faint mindedness!.
"Get away!" she screams!.
But her words are slurred!.
He hears, but won't listen;
moves in on his prey!.
Skin turning red,
becoming pain with his burn!.
Radar flashing
screaming "Get out of the sun!"
Hiding away in the shade,
awaiting it to set!.
Mind clearing, words returning!.
Dark burn still stinging!.
Stupid naive girl
let the sun take her pale!.
No longer pure and untouched,
but used and corrupt!.
Stupid young girl
forgot to wear sunscreen!.
Skin burning with sin,
from the insensetive sun!.
Never got inside,
burn slowly fading!.
Sooting dark all around!.Www@QuestionHome@Com