Rising Floods
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Floods Rising Threatening Civilians Flee Celebration Wine Sparkling Lovable Vintage PopWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your count is off sweetie, don't feel too bad have done that myself! I do like what you have written really cool and will try it sometime myself! Yes really like it! Try again OK! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I think she meant 1, 2, 3, 2, 1 Very nice!.!.!.these are the epitome of economy in writing!. Well done!. Edit: Nope, it is supposed to be 1, 2, 3, 4, 1!.!.!.I just looked it up!. You could say "all civilians" and instead of vintage "aged perfection"Www@QuestionHome@Com Check the syllables on your fourth lines to make sure you're correct!. Once that is corrected, the poems will be wonderful!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Neither of your fourth lines have the correct amount of syllables!.Www@QuestionHome@Com CleverWww@QuestionHome@Com |