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Question: Poem by a 10 year old!?
This is a poem written by 10 year old grandson lamenting loss of our great trees!.
Trees, trees, wonderful trees
sometimes they are old and wise
sometimes they are new and young!.
Drinking the rain that falls from our sky
Sooooooooo!
Why do you cut them down
you losers why!?
you losers!.
wise head on young shoulders don't you think!? IreneWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a very noble and sensitive poem!.
May you have a new Keats or Wordsworth growing up in your family!.
The poem is godd!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
not really im 11 and ummm that was ok!.!.!.!.!.but any 10 yearold would write a poem bout that there not babies
by me
the clouds float over the sky
slowly drifting by
it makes you think of the world today
you have to have a say
polutions filling the world with dusty skys
seen by my own eyes
trees chopping down
now thats somthing to frown about
the wether changes from minute to minute
its not good
we all need to do a part
we all need to start
or there will be no world for anyone
so help save the earth the planets and the sunWww@QuestionHome@Com
Its nice, but its nothing new sadly!.
I was writing about similar things at that age 30 yrs ago!. He now needs to learn why the road was built, so he can challenge things properly!. It isn't really satisfactory to just brand it as useless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Aww, thats really good especially for a ten year old!. also it's amazing how a little ten year old kid knows enough about the goings on in the world, and takes enough interest in the enviroment as a whole to be able to write this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very wise, its very sad whats happening around the world with the trees!. one day we will live to regret it!. although at the moment, its primates and animals that are suffering because of what we are doing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So passionate!. Love nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
look every thing which has some better and good mining
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some bad it is depend on particular you are looking some thing in this poem good its your view i have no need to say more about this thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com
that is a great poem that was writen by a 10 year old woww is he your grandkid or son or whatWww@QuestionHome@Com
hahahahaha =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
You should tell her where paper comes from lol its cute tho!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
He sees the root of the problem!.
Who knows where he'll branch out to!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
HA! That is a classic that I hope finds a good home on a refridgerator for a LONG time!Www@QuestionHome@Com
He has a good head on his shoulders !.!.U should be proud!Www@QuestionHome@Com
very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
Not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What did he write it on!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
cool poem!!!!!!! he's v!. gud 4 his age!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
lol cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com
no i could do better than that when i was 10!. No biggyWww@QuestionHome@Com
His head would be wiser if he realised that cutting down trees is not a problem if new ones ares allowed to grow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com