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Question: Poem by a 10 year old!?
This is a poem written by 10 year old grandson lamenting loss of our great trees!.
Trees, trees, wonderful trees
sometimes they are old and wise
sometimes they are new and young!.
Drinking the rain that falls from our sky
Sooooooooo!
Why do you cut them down
you losers why!?
you losers!.
wise head on young shoulders don't you think!? IreneWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a very noble and sensitive poem!.
May you have a new Keats or Wordsworth growing up in your family!.
The poem is godd!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not really im 11 and ummm that was ok!.!.!.!.!.but any 10 yearold would write a poem bout that there not babies

by me

the clouds float over the sky
slowly drifting by

it makes you think of the world today
you have to have a say

polutions filling the world with dusty skys
seen by my own eyes

trees chopping down
now thats somthing to frown about

the wether changes from minute to minute
its not good

we all need to do a part
we all need to start

or there will be no world for anyone
so help save the earth the planets and the sunWww@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice, but its nothing new sadly!.

I was writing about similar things at that age 30 yrs ago!. He now needs to learn why the road was built, so he can challenge things properly!. It isn't really satisfactory to just brand it as useless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww, thats really good especially for a ten year old!. also it's amazing how a little ten year old kid knows enough about the goings on in the world, and takes enough interest in the enviroment as a whole to be able to write this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very wise, its very sad whats happening around the world with the trees!. one day we will live to regret it!. although at the moment, its primates and animals that are suffering because of what we are doing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

So passionate!. Love nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

look every thing which has some better and good mining
and
some bad it is depend on particular you are looking some thing in this poem good its your view i have no need to say more about this thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

that is a great poem that was writen by a 10 year old woww is he your grandkid or son or whatWww@QuestionHome@Com

hahahahaha =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

You should tell her where paper comes from lol its cute tho!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

He sees the root of the problem!.

Who knows where he'll branch out to!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

HA! That is a classic that I hope finds a good home on a refridgerator for a LONG time!Www@QuestionHome@Com

He has a good head on his shoulders !.!.U should be proud!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What did he write it on!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

cool poem!!!!!!! he's v!. gud 4 his age!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

no i could do better than that when i was 10!. No biggyWww@QuestionHome@Com

His head would be wiser if he realised that cutting down trees is not a problem if new ones ares allowed to grow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com