Can you read another poem?

Question: Can you read another poem!?

Caregiver
By C!.S!.Scotkin

“How are you!?” I ask
referring to her infection!.
eyes fill, close,
futile attempt at composure!.
“I’m OK!. Each day
is harder, he knows my name,
not my face!. No longer
has a past or a future!.”
An altered state,
incomplete widowhood,
custody only of his body!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Unfortunately our perceptions of this condition is not their perceptions!. All of the physical, mental and emotional afflictions that burden us still affect them but we are unable to reach them to make assessments!. This is our inability not theirs!. We are the ones groping in the dark!. Great poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think U have something more than poetic line here!. A story narrator !.!. or writer !.!.I think U 'd make a very good novelette writer in such worm poetic line, aiming at kids!. The type of stories read to children at bed!. U know why !? The tone of Ur poem has a touch of Louis Carrol's tone in ( Alice in Wonderland)!.!.Try it and see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I now spend every Wednesday morning volunteering at the Assisted Living Center where my Father-in-law lived!. I read them the headlines, after breakfast!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Alzheimer's isn't as silent a disease as some may think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Caregivers are saints in human form!. Timely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have seen this disease up close!. As a nurse, you know there is someone still in there, no matter how far away he seems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice, looks a bit incomplete!.!.!. at least, thats why i think!Www@QuestionHome@Com