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Position:Home>Poetry> Here's one that should be not cut up and sprinkled into you Cheerios. Do youQuestion: Here's one that should be not cut up and sprinkled into you Cheerios!. Do you like it!? *****
BURNT OFFERING We move the chips and crack the whips grinding away at the wheel, We flop and flip as Boss insists making and breaking the deal… We turn and burn and then return except on Saturday, We work like jerks, our time away then, Sunday, bend and pray… We go and flow and do not show that we see through the fog, We tote and fetch, ignore the letch and beat the rabid dog… *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: We are the Burnt Offering, or at least the Burnt Out offering!. Strains of Dolly Parton's 9-5 come ringing through my mind uninvited!. Now I'll have that song in my head all day!. It's too early for that!. Thanks, TD!. I do believe I will drown myself in a bowl of Cheerios now!.!.!.delicious irony!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!', Pretty much said!. Work all day, no time for play!. WELL DONE! Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. =) It flows very well!. I really like it actually!. Congrats!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Fantastic as usual, sir!Www@QuestionHome@Com Internal AND end rhyme!. And rhythm too!. This boat floats!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You go dog!Www@QuestionHome@Com After reading this makes me tired and hungry so I want my cheerios!! Good job, Cheers!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com WOW!. But the truth!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com WOW!!Www@QuestionHome@Com wow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Uh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.sure why not!Www@QuestionHome@Com oh!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com that's great!. and so honest!. have you thought about trying to get published!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |