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ONTO THE HEAP In retrospect, I do regret asunder gone experiments, Time machines, recycled dreams, Twisted, broke and bented things In my notes, I must have wrote, at least a thousand times, Your toy boat, it will not float, without rhythm and rhyme… Ta Dah! *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: And here all these people go telling me that poetry doesn't have to rhyme!. Your last line has shattered everything I've done!. I'M LOST, ALONE, ADRIFT!!! And laughing my head off!. This is very beautiful, but with your subtle undertone of humor (at least to me, who likes to laugh at everything)!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I had toy boats but the dog chewed them and they sunk!. Now I play with pencils and pens and numbers and words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Hi!", I agree a boat that doesn't have rhythm, Isn't a good boat to be SAIL upon!. : ) WELL DONE! Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com I made a toy boat of the paper I wrote my first pome on, it didn't float!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Please, TD, do NOT throw up!. They are not THAT bad!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Float my boat bented fine oh!.!.!. did forget the sail! Rudders help too! Sail on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com hmmmm!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |