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Gun Shy Kisses-(+)-
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Half thrown out on the street
my heart hit the pavement
and all I could do was get to it
The mission
The victim
and the means
had been set to me
Now all I had to do was find out
what love truly was…
So that I could betray it…
-Short to throw her right into the action… there is a reason the boss picked this particular assassin for the job… you will have to wait and see why… what do you think of this installment!?
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Same thing: Use what you like!. Ignore the rest:
My heart hit the pavement
all I could do was get to it
The mission
The victim
The means
had been set
Now all I had to do was find out
what love truly was…
So that I could betray it…
Those final three lines are very poetic!. They could hold a poem on their own!. I just tried to give you a more parallel structure here!.
Enjoying it so far!.!.!.nice serial tale!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good installment, punchy, quick, running after the heart in the street is a great gritty and visual image!. Can't wait for more!. Why this particular mark!.!.!.it had better not be her brother or cousin or something like that!. And don't go all truly cheesy and have her fall in love with him!.!.!.unless you pull it off right!. You've set yourself up for a fall here!.!.!.but you did that with Trial of Sight, too, so I'm betting you can get through this satisfactorily!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I recall once reading Murders in the Rue Morgue (EA Poe)and being scared when one of the characters opened a door at the end of a chapter!. (thinking one of two possible things could happen) and putting the book down because it was so freaky, before I could even literally turn the page!.
I'm very glad these offerings are in installments!.!.!.!.gives me a chance to breathe normally!.
These smaller poems get the blood and mind racing!. It's all good! :-)
A serial Thriller!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a sense of urgency and mystery in this one!. This "siren" assassin seems to have a lot to learn, and perhaps what she learns about love will save her from herself!. Only time will tell!. This is a really good one!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is really great poetry and so true in my eyes!.I love all your poetry as your straight to the bone and always to the point without all the candy coating!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really love your work!. Thanks for another good one, and, to answer your question, yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is definately going to cost extra!!Www@QuestionHome@Com