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Question: I would like your opinion on a song I wrote 2 years ago!. Love on the sea is rough!.!.!.!?
I wrote this sitting on the SS Becky Thatcher docked in Marietta, Ohio during a blues festival that day and we performed it that night!.!.!.

SS BLUES
When you take more than a chance
And love goes over the side,
It ain't no circumstance
There's a rising of the tide
She comes off avant-garde
And sizes up her man,
She'll make you whiskey hard
Your legs unsure to stand
Baby your needs and your wants
Are impressive to fulfill,
That ol' simular haunt
Lies waiting on the hill

CHORUS
Too desperate just to hope
I got your Dear John news,
There's a hole in the boat
Of SS Blues!.

The bar tab that I got
Just from drinkin' about you,
The kitchen got too hot
My aim it got shot too
Don't stack your chips on fate
If you can't control the boards,
Throw away them Aces and Eights
Or Kings and Jacks will pull their swords

CHORUS
I could never quench her thirst
From her head down to her shoes,
Worst came to worst
On the SS Blues
I knew I was cursed
On the SS Blues!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the lyrics though hearing the melody/actual song performed would be nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah!.!.!.amazingly bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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