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Question: Thankyou Card!.!.!. Is this ambiguous or is the question clear!.!?
Thank you!.!.!. Thanks a lot!

Carefull words thrown carelessly
into the space between our eyes/

But, I stole a look at your hands
hands bronzed by the sun!.

The same sun that heats our earth, blinds my eyes
dries the persperation from your brow!.

You planted a simple tree in my earth
but in my mind grow forests and rivers flow!.

Surely you are my brother,
returned!.

Strange that those who love me give naught
but cut flowers
delivered by the hands of strangers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like!. It seems that you are the person, buried, commenting about the shallowness of many and the love of one!. Thoughts to ponder here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the rhythm suggests to me that Ur poem was written in other language then translated!.!. some imbalance in rhyming (brow !.!.flow) !.!.I like it !.!.expressing Ur love to Ur hardworking brother who gives and plant 4 the others who just reap!. A picture of "looking for justice & apreciation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, to give back an earthly gift, I have planted a few trees
in memory of others, The act is heart warming, as is your
pondering poemWww@QuestionHome@Com