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Question: So!? what do you think of !.!.!.Honestly!?
I understand I must not write
explicitly or pointedly
of phalluses and sweat
pumping thighs
gutteral sighs
flesh and lust!.!.
These things are life
and lovely love!.
Honestly I must,
I feel compelled to ask
wilst wer'e in the thick of things!.
Would you rather
have me sing or ryhme
my latest tuppereware
than hair and loins
or the color of my lovers pants
than buttocks bare and groins!?
Ok I'll try
My tupperware holds left over beans!.
My lovers pants are blue!.
My tupperware is four years old!.
My lovers pants are new!.
Oh!!.!. now!.!. my interest wans,
excuse me my lovers here
I have something else to do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Well, I think this is hilarious!. Tupperware! The least likely source of mirth I can possibly think of, but somehow it becomes funny in your poem!. I needed a good laugh!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it was a nice poem up until you started talking about the tupperware!.!.!.that confused me a little, but the rhyming was really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
uhmm!.!.!. wow!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow!.!.uh!.!.its excellent, though its detailed, its good, just um!.!.insightful i guess, i'd call it nice, so keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
not exactly keats!.keep ur day job!.!.!.!.please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com