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Question: Really important! PLEASE COMMENT! sorry about the length!.!?
Hit me when you're drunk,
Get drunk while your sober,

Tell me about your anger,
Just tell me when it's over,

If it makes you feel strong and tall,
Shove me up against the wall,

Beat me until I cant stand or see,
You never showed any mercy,

Don't worry about the bruises,
I'll make up some excuses,

Another tear slides down my cheek,
You knock me down and call me weak,

Where was my good savior,
When I dealt with your behavior,

You're the reason for all of my childish fears,
I'm afraid to be alone, because of all the things gone wrong,

Yet I realize everyday,
That I've been alone all along,

This isn't your only form of torture,
Like you said in your journal: "There's other ways to hurt her"

The way you put your hands in my back pockets,
The eerie feeling gives me the creeps,

Then you touched my fragile face and I winced,
You tell me you love me, I'm not convinced,

I fullfilled your sickening pleasures,
As you invaded my personal treasures,Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
love it I went through the same thingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awful!. Toe-curlingly bad!. There's more to a poem than having words (nearly) rhyme!. Good idea for a subject, but absolutely dreadfully executed!. Please, no more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I responded to this on the other post!. 'Kay!? So read that one!.

xxx,
Consulting QueenWww@QuestionHome@Com