May I be so brash as to intrude once more?

Question: May I be so brash as to intrude once more!?

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WORKING GIRL

The moistened roots of your hair
let loose a smell unlike ordinary women,
A thick musk I can take hold of,
Nostril flaring scent, a bait in your mantrap!.

The beads of moisture roll off you
down alpine slopes, deliciously dirty,
You work and make movements
poetry does no justice to!.

A handful of you is dusty golden,
Washed down the bed, you turn
boulders to rocks and sway with
sandy grit sensations!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I can't possibly top Pat's answer!.!.!.LOL
Tastefully erotic and just a little dirty ;) Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think u just wowed me i'm seriously in like awe right now, its beautiful and kepp writing because even that little bit shows some major talent, and it's insightful as to some of ure thoughts so do as they say and write what u know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh - my imagery is failing - I'd rather see the muddy river - gouging out its channel - in the bottom of the Grand Canyon!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

your secretary!?
your gardner!?
its sweat equity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is not brash; it is gold!. If you keep posting I will get no work done today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh! My! God! yes yes yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nothing's been the same since you bought those shares in Kleenex!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whew-- shower time, just great, tastefully done! Cheers !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm laughing as I write this, but it really sounds like you're talking about a horse!.
Sorry if I missed something!Www@QuestionHome@Com