Poem for Today, very deep, very twisted?

Question: Poem for Today, very deep, very twisted!?

See if you can figure this one out

"Jump"

Today I leave to fight this war
A dark and dreary day;
It seems ironic that we leave
On this, my twentieth birthday;

I step through time,
And soon through space;
In an effort to fight our foe,
I don’t know when this fight will end
Or how long this war will go!.

I send you messages everyday,
But we jumped away to fast;
Six long years it will be, my love,
Until you receive my last!.

Time stands still for me, out here,
My thoughts our only of you;
I must wait those six long years before
You can say you knew!.

**I’m alive, it says, But is it true
The difference in time
Three years times two
They’ve jumped away again, the message said
Fifteen years I wait, to find if he’s dead**

My love, its me,
This time will pass;
Fifteen years will go by,
til you receive my last;

Were winning now,
In this endless night;
Two more jumps!.
Can win this fight;Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Castian your making me think to hard on a Wenesday!. This Poem defies all easy thoughts almost to the point of insanity!. I understand the concept but I'm having a little trouble in putting all the pieces together properly!.

I think that you are referring to a husband and a friend who is secretly his wifes boyfriend!. She is pregnant but it's not her husbands even though he thinks it is They are going off to fight a Galactic war together but she is pregnant with his friends baby and her husband doesn't know it!. The husband is writing his wife in parts of the poem and in other parts the boyfriend is writing her!.

The reason that they can do this is because they are on different Galaxies or possibly space ships!. Where I am having the difficulty is maybe the boyfriend was killed but before he died he told the husband about the son that was born after they had gone off to war that he was the father!. The husband in knowing this never told his wife that he knew about it!. He pretended that the son was his and in the last part of the poem he was looking forward to when the war was over to see his son when he comes home which will be almost the same age as when he left!. !.

Either that are it's about a father and son who left together to go fight and the son was a clone the same age as of his father but I couldn't make the ages come out right with your remarks so I'm not real sure what the hell your talking about but this poem sure gets you to thinkingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!. I'm speechless!.!.!. What a sad, meaningful poem!.!.!. You have talent! This poem is so deep, so emotional, it moves the reading!. I do hope you get this published, or at least share your talent with the world, because you are amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's certainly an imaginitive concept, but light years from being a professional effort!. Needs loads of work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's great!. Very, very sad but, as you say, very meaningful!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You say that it's his "girlfriend/wife"!.!.!.but, why does it say "My boy, I've grown much older now"!.!.etc!. It sounds here like it's his mother now or something!. *confused*Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its about a boy going to war !.!. but i might be wrong!.!.its one of the best poems i have read in a whileWww@QuestionHome@Com

thats sad!. :'[Www@QuestionHome@Com

So dark, Yet full of hope!! U 'v put all Ur wishes & fears!.!. the numbers are confusing !.!. & made the poem longer!.!. U could 'v managed them in a different way!. I'd say NOT BAD! BUT TRULY SAD!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LOVE this!. It is twisted, but it makes you long for the other with the character!. There was one part that sounded odd was: That long I must wait
For your voice to hear!. But it was very good!. And if you can believe or understand it, i did understand it, but i wasn't thinking about it physically!. Like he was actually going ahead by light speed, but that it seemed that way!.IDK!. Anyway, great poem, keep it up!. I would like to read more of your work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would have titled this Time to jump:
because you are in a hurry to get somewhere
regardless of the weather
its dark and dreary!.
You are having to go to war
and on your birthday!.
Hurrying causes stress
Wars can be temporary or
last for years!.
One of the lines in the poem 3x2
this is the second war!.
1939 - 1945!.
At least this is the war I am thinking of
Time stands still for you and your thoughts
are for your wife!.
Every nightmare when someone goes to war
because they might not come back!.
That is what wars are about
also injury!.
It is good you call to say you are okay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is about a 21 year old person who is struggling in life and must die but is worried about the ones he loves!. He's been sending many mssages of love until there are no more!. He's been stuggling his whole life from many things and must die because he can't stand the darkness and coldness he feels inside hime!. He's writing a goodbye note to his lover before he dies, the war of life is finally over!.
The other part is about his lover finally going to meet him in the otherworld and she is now very old yet never forgets him as if he was always there in her heart!. This is very blissful, sad, and achingly heartfelt!. Again, you moved me and othe reders to tears with an amazing and poetic talent!.
~ Native Lotus FlowerWww@QuestionHome@Com