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Question: My poem for the day!? War!?
Our sons, our daughters;
whose lives have been lost,
they volunteered freely;
but at what cost!?

No one is winning;
its just death throughout the land,
as the world sits by idle,
sitting on their hands

We've dug ourselves a grave,
in which we might not get out,
deeper though, yet deeper
soon no one will hear us shout,

both men say, they want an end
but now it is to late
we've pushed our luck to often
we've opened up hells gate!.

If we stop now, they'll hit us hard
try to even up the score;
generations will die, again and again
due to this senseless war!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Excellent, Castian

Very powerful and you really should get this one published!. This one should be shared with everyone!. Not just people here on Yahoo answers!.

The thing I found the most intriguing was in the first of the poem it sounded like it was talking about Anti-war then you took it to the direction it is to late we have opened up Hells gates which is precisely what we have done That's a strong statement that really hits hard!. Nice job

I would make a suggestion for another title since there are so many titled War!. It's just a suggestion but I believe I would title it "We Can't Go Back Now" That is what I was thinking when I finished reading it for the first time!.!.

Always remember to be sure and get a your poems copy righted before allowing anyone to use them!. Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really good!.!.!.Know exactly where your coming from my boyfriend is a marine, It seems like it is never going to end!. He deploys in about a month!. This is a great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its realy good but "Hells gate has been open sincne the world began!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I'm not lyin'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is really good!. i like it a lot!!!!!!!!!! its really has an awsome message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem is very true
it talks about the thousands of men
and women who lose their lives
at War!.
These soldiers from the wars
are either killed in battle or
crippled for life
Your poem reminds me of the remembrance
day service I go to each year
In wars no one wins
people are always losing
by paying the price
When people continually take chances
and gamble with life!.
In war there is no winningWww@QuestionHome@Com