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Question: Need honest opinions!.!.!.!!?
I'm a dude and I write poetry!.!.!. I'm not gay or anything but it just comes to me so easy!. Is it any good though!?
I love you
The three words so hard to say
I mean it though
But it doesn't mean much today
Your off with someone else
No hope for a nice guy
You make me feel guilty
For giving love a try
No matter what I do
I can't change the past
I can give love another chance
But that probably won't last
I want one person in this world
Is that so hard to ask
This one thing I ask God
But its not a simple task
You see, the person for me
Is someone like you
I've picked out my love
But the love isn't true
If you don't love me
Its my time I've wasted
Wanted something to spark
But now I have to face it
You have no feelings for me
That's ok too
Now matter how long I live
I will still love you
LeeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awwwwwwww! I love this, it makes me feel sad, though!. But it's really good!. Normally, I hate poetry that rhymes!. But this is really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Aww! This sounds really good!. Like lyrics to a song!. It has a good flow!. You should write some music for it!.
P!.S!. you + are = you're :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your off with someone else
SHOULD BE:
You're off with someone else
Otherwise it is a sad poem, but not too bad!.
You should write a happier poem telling the lady of your intentions how wonderful she is!. That might solve your loneliness problem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its good reminds me of the situation i am or was in before i finaly got a girlfrined pretty much, i like that poem u should give it to her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I found it to be like a steamy scene from a movieWww@QuestionHome@Com
What has been gay got to do with anything, just because some of the greatest writers of our time are gay men, doesn't mean you have to be a gay man to be good at poetry, I find that a little offensive!. However your poem is good at best, it reads well and has imagery to flow nicely with your vision, a tad subjegated to make it immposible to clarify your meaning and grasp, well done, good attemp keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The only reason they would categorize you as gay is because they are jealous!. Gay has no bearing on writing one way or the other!. Continue to write your words of rhyme!. It doesn't matter what anyone thinks, they are your creations, from your heart, your soul!. Only another creative soul will understand that anyway!. The poem is good, and you will continue to improve the more you write, never let them deter you from your path of self expression!.Www@QuestionHome@Com