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Question: The Truth of Love --- Your feedback is greatly appreciated!!!?
The Truth of Love
I love the idea
Of love!.
I love the idea
Of knowing
That someone special will
Always be there!.
I love the idea
Of wrapping
My arms around her body,
Looking in her eyes, and knowing
That everything will always be alright
Because we have each other!.
I love the idea
Of a truly passionate kiss,
One that makes time stop,
And your heart speed up!.
I love the idea
Of waking up
In the morning with
Her
In my arms,
And starting off the day with seeing
Her face, peacefully asleep!.
I love the idea
Of having
Someone who I can show my inner self to,
An individual who knows
That my very existence
Is only to make them smile!.
I love the idea
Of somebody
Who can see
Me
For who I really am, not who I
Appear to be, and
Love that me!.
I love the idea
Of always
And forever!.
I love the idea
Of inside jokes and phrases
That only we can understand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love the idea
Of you putting more of your poems up!.!.!.
You simply have to write more!
You don't have a choice =]
I was very moved!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It was a little bit too long, and I think you should be a bit more creative with your 'ideas'!. Try much harder!. For example, I'd rather have had you say, 'i love going to the zoo and looking at the flamingos with you' than 'i love holding you tight!.' Those kinds of phrases are only used by songwriters because tight rhymes with right and love rhymes with above!.!.!. you see the connections!. (not saying that you should make your poem extremely wierd, just more unique)
:D Still, I absolutely adored your last lines and thus your amazing concept!.!.!. it was very powerful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW, that was amazing, i could really feel it, but the phrase "Looking in her eyes, and knowing
That everything will always be alright " is from a jonas brothers song!. Well anyway i loved it!! Could you please comment on mine too!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh my goodness! I really understand what you mean, I've gone through the same thing so many times before!.!.!.!.!.!.The poem really reflects your soul and inner purpose, and if this was meant for someone special!.!.!.boy, they'll end up in tears!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Aw! I love it! I like the part: "I love the idea of always and forever!." You write really good : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it!.
ill give a thumbs up + a star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com