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Question: Imposing wills, does it work!?
Conquered!?

sequestered thoughts, aching
aching to be alive… speaking
darkness reigns, fear comforts
truth is as they say

purging, exorcising, blessing death
they wear the sign and carry trident
retched smells attest their strength
they inflict God’s wrath…
unedited

and those that live… cower
repentance sang in whatever tune
survival, pride but a passing meal
truth is as they say…for nowWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is excellent, and eloquent, with the only word capitalized being God!. I'm not certain what the trident represents, but I personally view this as an attack on organized religion, which I hate with a fiery passion!. So I thank you, for singing a different melody, and for a different version of truth!. Let freedom ring!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem, woke me up a second time this A!.M!.
Perfect two word! ending, "for now" and when is now, Wow!
Bravo! Your use of words are ALWAYS the ultimate of
excellent!. Do you have a pulished book!?



What really tossed me, I had just left writing of a poem, on
the various people who read the bible and their use of self
power over others, or self improvement , etc!. etc

Edit, Force never works, No winners!Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting, this is a wrestling match!.
i reversed all the words to opposites
and it gets wild!.
this also has the weight of heavy metal music!.
the anger, but thats ok tho!.
i like the 'pride as a passing meal' line!.
"and thats the truhthh"!.!.!.(elizabeth ann, aka lily tomlin)Www@QuestionHome@Com

An exemplary statement of the ephemeral nature of truth, with a small "t!." The lines, "they inflict God's wrath!.!./unedited," are outstandingly creative and stunning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
"Good afternoon Neonman!"

This was a very touching and so true poem!. Written and expressed quiet well!.

WELL DONE !
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Imposing poem!. Deep and thought provoking!. I too get something different each time I read it!. I will be pondering this for a while!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The absolute terrifying thought of a Theocracy!. I will print this out, with your permission, of course!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A fine piece of writing, it means more each time I read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com