What do you think of this poem: My Consumption?

Question: What do you think of this poem: My Consumption!?

My Consumption

I am in serenity
I am in soul
I am in song
I am in sound

I am honest
My corruption is complete
I am truthful
My sin is sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Beautiful, declarative, powerful!. The consumption is in everything that the viewer finds beautiful, it is in passion, it is in glory, it is in perfection and imperfection!. It is desired above all things, and ridiculed as well!.

I am in glory
I am in fire
I am in passion
I am in destruction!.

I am beautiful,
made so in your words!.
I am impure,
but all that's seen and heard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting!.!.!.!.!. Its really good but i just feel kinda confused because it has conflicting ideas that don't go together!.!.!. like I am truthful!.!.!.and then you say the word "corruption" its like completley the opposite!.

Just keep the theme in the first stanza and continue on in that light! But besides that, its a good poem! :)

Keep up the good work :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it, it is short and to the point and best of all its not corny or trying to sound deep or meaningfulWww@QuestionHome@Com

niiceeeeeeeeeeeeeWww@QuestionHome@Com

how a sin is sweet!?all belongs to I
RE-WRITE THE POEMWww@QuestionHome@Com