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Question: A poem for you veiwing!. please comment!?
The Bridge
The bridge is hard to get across,
long, tedious, and full of cracks,
one mistep and it's a broken back!.
The Bridge can also be forgiving,
but all the bad is what you remember,
down you go with just a slight tremor!.
Your legs hurt with the pain of walking,
but lowe and behold there is a light,
it shines strong, bueatiful, and bright!.
It pulls you towards its burning glory,
but you look down to find a peice of glass,
you see an old man with a beard and a moustache!.
There is this old man,
and you know its you,
and you think to yourself, "this can't be true!."
The journey was long,
so hard and unforsaken,
and many years it has taken!.
Ahead is the light,
behind is the strife,
and you realize its just life!.
All the pain is gone now,
and you've stepped into the light'
the trip was hard but now, you have one the fight!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is such a awesome poem it has good flow and good words i love how your poem is a story of life and has different things that represent it
great poem good job!
it is almost kind of sad but it is the truth the story of lifeWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's alright, i love the line "It pulls you towards its burning glory"!.
That line was the only one that really stood out for me, the rest is not to bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow i like it!!
one the fight!?
orr won!?
haha!.!.answer mine!?
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This poetry is definately a single most exciting real peice of theateric simplicityWww@QuestionHome@Com
its beautiful!.!.!.!.!. but not flawless!.u must relate to the title towards the end or it may come across as ambigousWww@QuestionHome@Com
whoa!. that was awesome! i loved it! keep writing!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com