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Question: Wrote a song what do you think of it!? is it good!?
why does this always happen to me
sure i
can see now
yes i can see now
all the things you did to me
hopeless
listless
why does this always happen to me
now im so cold
and i know
i was wrong
and you were right
and i can tell
you saw through my fright
i needed you tonight
do you need me!?
i needed you then
do you need me!?
i need you now
do you need me!?
i need you
do you need me!?
did you need me!?
you say
get away
dont speak to me
you want nothing to do with me
and
my heart
fell
it hit the floor,
the one i gave you to hold onto
and adore
so its time
to go back home
turn on the music
grab a bottle,
hold it to my mouth until i start to wobble
and drown out the sound of life
friendless
lifeless
hoepless
listless
i needed you
did you need me
i needed you
did you need me
did you need me

i just kinda threw it together, its more like a rant than a song!.!.if music were with it i think it would be upbeat fast tempo alternative or hardcore rock!.!.what do you think, HONESTLY!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wholey **** that was amazing!!!! I loved it I played it eith a tune on my guitar that was just great!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I read it and I liked it!. good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com