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Question: This is what I love, what do you think!?
A Pond in my back yard
that's where I spend my time
a baitcaster in my hand
with one thing on my mind

then its back to work I go
I'd rather be long gone
Like down watching the top fuels
with the rattle down in my bones

sit me in my front yard
with my dogs in my lap
put me in my house
playing with my cats

these are my simple pleasures
they bring a smile to this face
these are the little miracles of home
this is why I love this place

some folks can't find happiness
and they search all through time
but there's no place I'd rather be
Happiness, is what's in your mindWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Loved your poem and most of it hits home , but there was a part of it, that I didn't quite understand,

Two lines, I know it talks about something familiar to you, if you have a moment give me a clue!
Like down watching the top fuels with the rattle down in my bones -- right here I kind of got lost! Can you explain what your talking about!? Thanks!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Good!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. mine As we look towards the beach and think of family out of reach!.!.as the new day dawns and a flower blooms we pray to god for all that looms!.!.while our thoughts are both near & far one takes comfort under the southern star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In this poem I see everything as thoughts of eagernessWww@QuestionHome@Com

Aww, cute!.
Did you write it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com