Kind of an odd poem. What do you think?

Question: Kind of an odd poem!. What do you think!?

I don't know if anyone will like this, but I am going to post it anyway!. Good way to get rid of writers block!.

When one door closes
another door
opens, right!?

Well, what if we
run out
of doors!?

What if that
is the end of all
opportunity!?

When all the doors
are sealed, we’ll
be trapped!.

In this horrid
land of second
guesses!.

We are stuck
in the land of
what-ifs!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This has a simple thought put behind it which lends to its effectiveness!.!.!. the concept of doors opening and closing, the 'one door opens and another closes' has been around for a while but, in your first line, you speak the concept then ask the question, is that 'right!?' This is the way I see many people take many simple concepts!.!.!. only when they really look at it do they realize that they don't really understand it yet!.!.!. so, the poem takes us on a little trail through what the voice thinks while examining this old concept anew!.!.!.
and we are still left with a question 'What If' though, in the poem, it may not be in question form it is still what the voice is dealing with!.!.!.

I enjoyed this one!.!.!. keep writing, some of the stuff you may not think is good could be geniuses to others!.!.!.

Blessed Be in the Clearing of Writers Block, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think it is very neat!!! i like writing novels, but im not quite that good at poetry!! you are very talented and i think that is great skill to have!!!

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