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Question: New Poem, how is it!?
I look up at the blurry sky
So that my tears don't overflow
Why can't people live
As they want to!?
A weak heart that's unable to cry
Doesn't need the strength to keep from crying
I look for a shooting star
To place my wish on
But the dawn comes too soon
And I'm unable to find one

The reason there isn't a day
When I remember you
Is because I haven't forgotten you for a moment

It's become a habit to say it's alright
Whenever I come across something sad
Something stopped on that day
For me, and now
No matter how much I pray
I can't see a single star

I miss you, I miss you
Only in my memory your smile is too tender
There's nothing I can doWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would say that it's more of like a song because it doesn't rhyme and poems are supposed to rhyme!. But that was awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good!
it would sound good in a songWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow how touching and emotional!.!.!.!.!.!.!.very sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow! that was really good!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com