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Question: Do you like my poem!? Let me know what you think!?
Weeping willow with your tears running down,
why do you always weep and frown!?
Is it because he left you one day!?
Is it because he could not stay!?
On your branches he would swing,
Do you long for the happiness that day would bring!?
He found shelter in your shade,
he thought his laughter would never fade!.
Weeping willow stop your tears,
for there is something to calm your fears!.
You think death has ripped you forever apart,
but I know he'll always be in your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
aw i liked it!.
it had so much meaning in it!.
i love the rhyming in it too!.
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This poem has a goood rhythm in it and is a good poem!. The only bad thing about it is that you need similies, metaaphors, Onomatopeia, sibilance, etc to give it a better and more deeper meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com
nice but i knoW DEEP DOWN YOU CAN CHANGE IT GO FOR GOLD!Www@QuestionHome@Com
umm!.!. i don't think you wrote that poem because i remember that from the movie " my girl" !?!?!? the little girl wrote that poem nice try ;]Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very well done! Brava!
and keep on writing poetry, you've got a way with words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Dumba$$ you got this from My Girl!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its, nice, but you should add more too itWww@QuestionHome@Com
i agree it needs more added to it
im sure it could be better its kind of boringWww@QuestionHome@Com