What so you think of this poem. Cheers : )?

Question: What so you think of this poem!. Cheers : )!?

Hi, good morning all!.
This is a poem about what happened to me, a couple of days ago, when I awoken to my husbands tummy!.

Awoken to my
Husband’s tummy,
At 4:00 AM,
I cook him yummies,

I could have pretty much,
Just laid in bed,
Or get a block of wood,
And nock him on the head,

He’s playing a game
Called EVE online,
Which I do believe,
Is a waist of time!?

I much more prefer,
Yahoo instead,
As I post my poems,
And I get them read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If you are a kid this is brilliant!. If you are an adult!.!.!.!.I am not trying to be mean here!.!.!.did you finish school!? The grammar is poor (waste was the word you wanted, not waist!) the topic is silly and unless this was meant to be funny, it's a WASTE of a yahoo question!. I'm sure this is cute and funny to you and your hubby but from a literary standpoint, it stinks!. It doesn't even have a great humor value!. You were probably bored!. I do stuff like this all the time but I don't post them publicly and ask for people's opinion like it's some great work of art!. Oh well, at least I got points for answering this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not quite sure of the message in this poem!? also, not only did you rhyme "tummy" with "yummies" but I am sure you can go deeper into your poem!. This is a good starting point!. Just think more about what you are trying to get the reader to think or understand and see when they read your piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but it's a waste of time and effort, both from your point of view and mine!. You need to learn how to spell!.

Reply to Jake W!. Time spent should not necessarily be assessed by whether it was 'enjoyed' or not, but by whether it has produced anything worthwhile!. I'm sure vandals enjoy the time they spend defacing and destroying things, but it's hardly time 'well-spent', is it!? This poem is simply not worth the time taken to write (or read) it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Galactia, omg some people are so rude!. Your poem is cute, funny and it`s about yahoo!.
Thanks for loving to be on here with us!. We would be bored without you!.
Your poetry is always entertaining!. OK, of course this is not your best work but who cares!. lol
My favorite's are your trigee poems!.

Oh and lol about your husband's growling tummy, and the wooden blocks on his head!. heheWww@QuestionHome@Com

loooved it!.!.!.you must be a famous poem writter
well heres a poem
cats
cats oh cats
you chase the rats
eat them all up
in only one gulp

cats oh cats
you sit on mats
dirty them up
your scared of pups

cats ooh cats
you eat a rat
sit on a mat
every day you do that
and then in the end you get
FAT!

lolxxxWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it's mid-afternoon here in Wisconsin USA!.
This was fun!. I too am one of the "old school" wives who gets up and cooks breakfast, packs hubby's lunch, etc!.!.!.!.
Be proud!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great Job I loved it! You are awesome and keep on writing poems like this!. What i liked about it is that it is funny and it rhymes!

Have a great day! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sure, it's a poem!. Next time "knock" him on the head and don't "waste" your time feeding him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Haha very funny!. I like your laid back approach to this poem!. I can tell you have fun writing this!. Just remember one thing, enjoyed time is not wasted time!. Take care!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its very interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Again U R right
about Yahoo! site
Ur husbands silly game
will bring U no fame
make of it no fuss
U R better here with us
SIS : be cool to the brother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com