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Question: My scars poem please comment!?
scars
they stick with you forever
wherever you go
only you can see them
they bleed inside
cant block out
the pain i feel
so alone
so helpless
why god
if you exist
torture me with memories
screws up my mind
never know whats inside
lost myself in the battle
cant see
the light that once was meWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Scars indeed remain forever,
They are there as a Reminder!.
Ti's' not God that plants them there,
Memories, like photos You choose to Dig Out!.
Feelings you Have, That you Can't Talk About!.

Do not Remiss, what you have Lost,
Be Glad You Had It,
What ever The Cost!.

Find In Your Heart The Room,
For Forgiving,
Open Your Soul,
And Carry On Living!


I Liked Your Words !. Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ry and nannaplus, your words are beautiful and if you have felt like this, you definitely know it!. I have to agree with Forever Wandering!.!.!.WOW! It is really neat how after reading these two poems that two thoughts came to my mind!. The first was how awesome that we can inspire each other (thinking nannaplus wrote hers after she read yours)!. The second was how beautiful it is if nannaplus wrote hers a long time ago to find out that someone else feels the same!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's so good!. I can totally relate to that!. That's such an amazing!.!.!. I'm speechless, and that's saying something!. Wow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting what is your inspiration for writing this poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com