First Trigee Attempt?

Question: First Trigee Attempt!?

Honest opinions!? I think it's pretty horrible, and off topic!. I really need some advice!? Not just on this, but how to make trigees on the whole!.!.!.

Flying is………………!.what I am made for,
Exhilarating and…!.free,
Soothing……………!.like a mother’s love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I love the first one!. It is short and precise but has great emotional depth!. In fact you could even make it shorter and keep the feeling and coherence of the poem by removing the words "made for" !.
Flying is!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.what I am,
exhilarating and!.!.!.!.free,
soothing!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.like a mother's love
Just my two cents!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good but it could use some work!lolWww@QuestionHome@Com