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Question: Does this give an opposing view of Judgment!?
Inspired by Neonman's poem, Judgment, I have written this:
Black Heart
by Elaine P
Cygnus X1, the Swan
Has a black hole in its heart;
Luminous on the surface,
The constellation is destroying itself
from within!.
Do you know anyone
who is doing the same!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Many, and most have already past a point to be helped by mankind, they must now turn to a more powerful force to free themselves from the gravity which binds them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's different than the old cliché!. You can't judge a book by its cover!.
I see it this way!. Death’s dawning parades from the inside visible outwardly until the whole is lifeless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Burnt
Are the hands
That never reach out
To touch the soul of others
Lost
Thanks for the inspiration!.
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, unfortunately many!. Sad are they who die from within!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As in, "What's your poison"
I would think, yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
too many!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can think of a few!.!.!.a very sad situation to be destroyed from withinWww@QuestionHome@Com