Can you tell me what you think of this.?

Question: Can you tell me what you think of this!.!?

I can't draw very well, but I think my writing is decent, so check this out!.

http://s16!.photobucket!.com/albums/b38/ja!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I would try using a different word than communicate, it doesn't match the rest of the vocabulary, but I did enjoy it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, that seemed more like a little comic than a poem, but whatever!. It was interesting, but was a little too bland for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com