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Question: Did I rise to the challenge from Will shakesspeare !?
Should I compare thee to a week in summers, pay
or should I give it all up and call it a day
thou art very lovely yet appearing celibate
though one was loose according to my mate
sometimes too hot this lambskin codpiece
it would seem this time that I have been fleeced
By the end of summer thy will not fade
with all the burgers and lemonade
nor lose possession of thy Louis vitton bag
the going rate for a a bloojob and a shag
nor the death of my semi lying in the shade
will come back to life no matter should thy bade
there will always be a place for a dusky asian
I just hope that I can rise to the occasionWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Lol; that was hilarious! If its not considered plagiarism, which it might be of course, I think you might be able to make a career out of redoing famous poems like that by adding a comical twist!. It's creative, and has mass appeal!. Some huge fans of certain poems might not like seeing their favorite literature changed, but others might enjoy it since they know the rhyme and rhythm and meter etc!. of the poems with which they are so readily familiar!. Well done; and if you redo any others, be sure to post them!Www@QuestionHome@Com
yep he is right on the blue!.!.
you see them as collectors items *
only an artist can represent them self *
I owned that dream,,
gave it up!.!. its sort of
the spot one can get in*
as i never shopped in my life
for the sake of name brand *
I always searched Rembrandt *
Tou-louse-lautrec *
i will never fade away *
Picasso *
feel like choco-cream pie *
Guess I will Settle for Rubens *Www@QuestionHome@Com
http://www!.trasalimenti!.blogspot!.com/Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great, The Next 'Shakespeare'!.!.!.!.LOL!.!.!.!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day!?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com