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Question: A poem "Milk" thoights!?
Milk
Your snowy contents
Warmed my mind
Brought creature comforts
Appeasing my demons
If just for a moment
Headaches and heartbreak
Unattainable goals
Your sweetness drew me near
I drank you in
I forgot my sorrows
If only for a minute
Yet as time shaved
So did our connection
And something changed
Your crumpled carton
Dripped condensation
Sour breath discharging
Your contents spoiled
and our time expiredWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Fantastic!! This is a great poem!. You do a great job of really digging deeper and putting an unusual perspective on a topic most people wouldn't think to write poetry about!. Very original and creative, and you have a lot of skill with the English language!. Your poem also has a great rise and fall to it, with that plot twist at the end!. ;) Plus, most people (save for this world's oddballs that don't like milk) can identify with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
LOL!. yeah its great!. It takes a person with creativity to write a poem about milk!. It looks and sounds like you worked really hard on it!. Looking forward to more!.
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"Hi!"
Another great poem!.
WELL DONE! : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's good!.!.!. But, I notice that most of your poems seem to be about relationships!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it makes me remember Sylvia Plath!! don't know why!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is truly amazing!. i love milk!Www@QuestionHome@Com
LOVE IT!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
um sorry but isnt it kind of wierd to write a poem about milk!?Www@QuestionHome@Com