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Question: What do you think think of this poem/prayer!?
i made it after my dog was stolen!.We had her for three years!.And i know it sounds like a three year old wrote it but what are your thoughts!?

Dear Lord,
We miss Bo with all our heart,
Her being gone just rips me apart!.
I never know if she`s scared or blue
That`s why I`m saying this prayer to you!.
Please help her,guide her home
It breaks my heart to write this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
So sad !.!. 4 a moment I lost track here!.!.thought It was (God forbid) a family member !.!. well put!. hope U find Bo!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Missing Bo:
You are more than a pet
You are a dear friend
the fun times and memories I will not forget
and they will not end
I have no idea what happened
and I can't understand why
you got stolen
The tears coming down your eyes
is the pain
You kept me company
in good times and bad
You are considered one of the family
this time is very sad!.
He was someone special
the heartache I am going through
is for someone thoughtful
this is for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AWW!.!. i'm sorry about your dog!. It was very good!. The rhyming helped a lot!. Good Job!

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sad!.!.!.hope you find Bo soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com