Do you like this Saturday morning poem?

Question: Do you like this Saturday morning poem!?

Saturday morning
by Cynthia S!.

Morning has broken
gray, moldy
sky crazed, cracked
broken by lightening!.
a roar of pain
presaging rain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Love lightning, rain!.!.!.THUNDER!.!.!.!.Weeeee!!!!
Good poem, gal! Short, to the veritable point, with the smoothness of mist conveying your points!
Goodonyer!Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",

Short, creative with a dismal Saturday morning outcast!.
Well It's Saturday night here and you brought the rain with your poem which is good as my water tank has been running on empty and needs a re-fil, so we shore need it, in the desert of Australia!.

WELL DONE!
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would put quotation marks around "Morning has broken," since it comes from an old gospel song made famous by the former Cat Stevens!. The poem is very visual and to the point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good morning, Good morning,
I think this poem report is from Fla!.
Raining wet here too, stormy day
in view, raindrops love week-ends
it seems in In!.
Like the poem, but it is so wet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

kinda depressing for a Saturday morning but cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

What!.!.!. and now you live in the Chicago area! Or are you reading my mind and weather forecast! lol Nice!. And yes, I like, whatever city or area being described!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is good and applicable too as it is raining!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. It is short but conveys a mood undeniable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

yea pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com