What think you of a poem of wings?

Question: What think you of a poem of wings!?

I can break clouds
Apart!.!.!.with my
Wings!.

I can damp-down
Waves!.!.!.with my
Wings!.

I can push ships to
Safe Harbor!.!.!.with my
Wings!.!.!.

I cannot wear wings on
Shoulders!.!.!.

Lord!.!.!.I have tried to go
Home!.!.!.
To beauty!.!.!.

One day!. One day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Very philosophical!. The yearning in the end is a nice effect!.
Its intelligent yet emotional!. I would love to read more of what you've written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I must thank you for your compassion!.
and loyalty!.
thank you!.
you have given me inspiration as well
no one has encouraged me to right in along time!.
but some times we must let are ships sale into that dark night!.

your speech speaks true to the ages
and the futcher

I want to love,
I want to live,
but its a long long road out off hell!.
"Marilin Manson"Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it!. Its really innocent and gives a person a feeling of purity!. I love it!. Keep it coming!. I definitely can see this as being Spoken Word!. Perform this sometime somewhere and do it slowly!. THis is really hott!. I'm loving it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I just wrote one yesterday about the wish to fly!.!.!. But yours far outshines mine!.!.!. It is good to see you again, I do not think I have been here for a while!.!.!.

May I come in for coffee on this fine day or is it past your bedtime!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was uplifting! made me feel better =)

heres mine

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if I am wrong let me know but is this a lot more than a poem about angels!?

I read anti war!.!.!. anti war!. no wings on shoulders!. no wings of merit for combat!.

I think this poem is loaded!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. Enjoyed the guardian angel reference to wanting to go home to beauty one day!. Are you implying that even Angels have jobs!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have created beauty right here!. I wish I could fly, especially today!. I would soar through the heavens singing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Even the most powerful gift has it's limitations!.!.!.and we are all subject to our secret longings!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
It was VERY nice!.!.!.Thanks for sharing it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Look homeward angel, one day, yes one day!. KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com

Superb!. If you haven't got wings then it is good to know someone who has!. Soaring, uplifting!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely gentle yearning!. Thank you for this treasure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice makes me think of angels and innocence!. keep it on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Nice !!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Strong and gentle!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com