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Question: Do you like me new song/poem!? I call it "Unique"!?
When your souls gone cold,
And there is no one to hold,
When all your happiness is sold,
Dont let them slowly repaint your soul!.

Look at all the faded grass,
Look at the dead flowers in your vase,
When you lost something you cannot find,
Dont let them slowly recolor your mind!.

Others refuse to bend,
So you bend till you break,
You are surely not a hottie,
But dont let them slowly redesign your body!.

You got no friends,
You got no style,
Drop that knife,
Dont let them slowly redecorate your life

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think its SEXY!. I believe that you truly are a poet from some other universe!. You let poetry seep through the skin, the tissue, and the cells that is made of me!. You truly have the talent I strive to have!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

interesting!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i enjoyed it, well thought out, as a poem you need to edit it to get the meter right,Www@QuestionHome@Com