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Question: My poem i wrote "My Sea"!?
I wrote it last night, i like it a bit,, what do you think!?

My Sea

Twas from seas of west
whom blew thy waves
from its mighty chest
blown over sandy graves!.
Thunder echoes thy skies
and darkness it lights
and waves they rise
day darkens to nights!.
My sea, my sea, i look
you scatter debry on lands
lap by lap thy waves took
on washed up sands!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its awsum! but i dont think its as good as ur other poems!.!.!.!.!.!.keep writing tho!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com