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Question: Did Britney freak out because she realized she is not what consmetics make her and do you like my poem!?
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You gave me until midnight, Jacko!
My soul is mine for one more hour,
I don’t care that hell awaits me,
She’ll be here, consumed by fire!.
Mine! She’s mine alone,
For an hour, my fragrant flower,
I Devour you, throbbing heart,
The river kissed convulses,
Spent, liquidated, I slip away,
A cheap price for this moment,
For these spasms, this pain!.
Trembling now, knees are buckled,
All is gone and going,
Your back turned to me,
moonlit contours,
Gateway opens, down I fall…
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Strange and disturbing yet unquestionably written by a master of poetry!. "A cheap price for this moment"!?Must be an exquisite pain felt to be worth the price!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
do you wake up an alchemist like this every morning!? or sometimes is it just coffee!.!.!. brilliant visuals TD ! Faustish!
Faust's infamy became legendary while he was in prison, where in exchange for wine he "offered to show a chaplain how to remove hair from his face without a razor; the chaplain provided the wine and Faustus provided the chaplain with a salve of arsenic, which removed not only the hair but the flesh"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well maybe she freaks out because she always have bad luck on everything starting from her marriage!. Bad luck with men, bad luck with music, and evrything else!. Poor Britney is now a worldwide laughing stock!. What does it have to do with this poem!? Anything that i've missed!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hi TD Euwaite
ummm, not sure why Britney freaked, who knows, maybe!?! lolzzzz
this poem is very wonderful and unique!. you have an interesting way of putting words together, its lovely!
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I see one of your other selves has been released from asylum!. Will he be requiring this style as therapeutic remedy for heartbreak!? Great piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Damnation for an hour! That is one hell of a hell! Short term thinking often ends long term plans, in whatever arena played!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Different from your usual styles!. Which persona is this!?Fascinating!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have an amazing talent for writing poetry !!!.!.!.very creative word flow !Www@QuestionHome@Com
Did I just read a poem about you jerking off!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it is Interesting!.!.!.!.!.!.!.For at least you have that hourWww@QuestionHome@Com