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Question: Do you like my poem!? What do you think of it!?
Olive Black, Olive Green,
I love your taste but you block my spleen!.
I love you in salads and on bickies too,
I just wish that it was easier to poo!.
Wait! I've found the problem, there's a stone in the middle,
It's alright, it's ok, thank goodness I can still piddle!.
Once the olive is gone, the stones are great fun,
But alas, my brother's eyes, he only has one!.
Please don't copy it!!
Thanks, what do you think of it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
lmao
That will be a classic one day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
why the h3ll would anyone copy that stupid poem!. just kidding but it's kinda g@y! it's cool though but i wouldn't dedicate it to a gf or anything if i was smart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think I am tramatized for life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its a little disturbingWww@QuestionHome@Com
ahahahahhaha!.!.!.!. easier to pooo!.!. u ate too much cheese!!!! but it was a very good poem, i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com
lmao
its funny:D
ily
--frannyWww@QuestionHome@Com
LOL !
HAAA!.
Love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its funny!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
Lol!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com
its decent!. you have talent!. its a little weird tho and doesnt flow very well, but good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its funny but in a weird wayWww@QuestionHome@Com
what the hell!.!.!. funny!. but it could use a little workWww@QuestionHome@Com