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Question: How this poem!?
i see your face in my mind
like pieces of glitter you slip past me
the teacher is babbling about something to do with maths
i know only basic maths that me + you = happy
but i didnt notice the man u couldnt take your eyes off
his fantastic muscular body
and my beastlyness
my uglyness so horrific u cringed at the first touch
your beauty would radiate me
now it only leaves it drawn and in need of you
i desire to just touch you 1 last time
before you had left
before i found the note saying why you left
but you can forever know
i love you
3 simple words
thrown around remorselessly
and yet so true
so i plant a final kiss upon your picture
leave a note on the bedside along with your present from my birthday
and now i fear pain at what i am about to do
a voice in my head tells me move on
ignore you but i cannot
love has driven me SO close to you
and yet i can never have you
the knife cuts my skin slowly
i watch my blood flow freely
and as blackness fills me i c you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Incredible, the emotional build up was flawless!. I love this poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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