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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like my second Poem? / Sad?Question: Do you like my second Poem!? / Sad!? A last breath goes do a loving mother
The last hug goes to a best freind And a last kiss goes to a fine lover The last tear goes to a carrying dad But my last words will not be reviled not in 1 year and not in 100 years will they be reviled only the ones that love me will know!. The true words The last words And I hope they love them!. As they loved me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Girl I was about to cry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You have heart, and have felt pain, it is true!. Though if you are looking to find out if this is an everlasting work, I regret to say, "Nay!." The topic is outstanding, in the literal sense!. But there is no surprise in the end!. It reveals a message that has been conveyed more than once and from a many!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i agree!. there needs to be a meaning otherwise it just stops and is confusing!. yes it is sadWww@QuestionHome@Com |